Workplace English: Thursday's assignment -- updated

Workplace English: Thursday's assignment -- updated: Let’s work on our writing! Don’t worry you have a lot of time—due date is on Monday 5 th . You will practice writing "a letter ...



1-   Banning Trans Fats

Dear Editor,

I’ve read the article named “Banning Trans Fats”.

I agree Trans Fats should be banned because it brings a series of serious health issue.
But I disagree with some kind of ways to do this.

The first reason I disagree because the public might not know the harmfulness of
Trans Fats.

The second reason I disagree because the juveniles might not know the harmfulness of
Trans Fats.

The
third reason I disagree because no any warning about the harmfulness of Trans
Fats from the labels.

I
suggest that let the public know the truth about the harmfulness of Trans Fats
through the social publicity is very important.

I suggest
that let the juveniles know truth about the harmfulness of Trans Fats through
the school education is very important.

I suggest
that the harmfulness of Trans Fats should be listed from the labels.

I hope
my suggestions can give you some idea to perfect it. Thank you.

Best
regards

Cynthia